Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

Prompt Response: I deepened my analysis of Cheryl's hardships. I also added in more connection words to strengthen my argument. Overall, I wanted to use better literary analysis words.


Summary: We revised our drafts.


Reflection: I learned that there are a lot of things that need tweaking in your first draft. I will use this to help me understand what I need to change. 

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